Good work you have here:
+ Very good voice acting
+ Well animated
+ A funny concept for a parody
+ overall good designs
- The midi-esque intro loop was not the best of the choices
With that on mind i suggest you to improve the "intro", the rest is fine, good job and keep your future works at the same level or even more!
Death Star 2: Not Clones
The Emperor has learned that Darth Vader does things he's not authorized to do and he gets mad.
This was started about one or twoish years ago. I just lacked the motivation to really finish it until recently.
The art has been approved drastically since the first one:
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/575929
Includes long intro and sudden ending like the real thing, along with a custom theme in the intro.
Animation too. Hope you enjoy.
Oh yeah, there's a scene after credits.
Great you deserve a 5 Because Vader is cool and if i dont vader will blow me up along with the death star :D
Dosensuppen responds:
He'd just blow you up.
Funny. and good voices. i liked it
Dosensuppen responds:
Awesome. and good opinion. i liked it
This was definitely an interesting take on Star Wars.
It has all the good qualities of parody. I would definitely like to see it in the NG library.
It's not completely original though, so I can't give it five stars.
Dosensuppen responds:
Unless something's extremely well animated, parodies are the only route.
