I don't think that this game was well made at all. There were many times I would jump on a block but I would be in it not on it. Also the jump was barely high and far enough and the damage was off, you would lose health in the space near an enemy not so much when you were touching one.
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Ayuda a Barcenas a recolectar todos los sobres de dinero, evitando los enemigos y escapa hacia la salida directo a Suiza!
archienemigo responds:
Thank you for your comment. I agree with your opinion, probably I should have written that this was an assessment for college and it was my first year designing games on flash. But anyway, you're right, and I appreciate it, I'll keep it in mind for my next project, thank you
I thought its english site.
archienemigo responds:
Sorry! I uploaded this "game" so my spanish firends could test it out and let me know what they think, I didn´t expect that people will try this to be honest!
I can see this is your first submission, and I did keep that in mind, but I don't believe that it does any good to sugar-coat the truth. I really, really don't want to put you off making stuff because you could become amazing (:
Visually, it is a lot nicer than a lot of first-time submissions (that I've seen). There are a fair few graphical problems - landing halfway through the blocks, the 'bullets' are bland and the enemies simply disappear from the world but the overall 'look' of the game is decent. (Now might be a good time to mention that the main menu is broken and the "how to play" button shows the credits)
The real put off for me was the sound - The music is pretty dire and stopped altogether after several minutes rather than looping of changing. The jumping 'boing' wouldn't have been so bad if it weren't so loud and the speech when I collected the envelopes sounded awkward. (The actual script might have been great, I'm only fluent in English so I won't presume)
I think with some more experience you can really improve your work. You clearly have a good grasp of the visual aspect of things... Keep going for it.
archienemigo responds:
Hi! Your review made me very happy. I didn´t visit this page since almost when I published the game and I was surprised there was comments on it. To be honest this was an assessment for school and I just uploaded here so my friends in Spain could play and let me know what they think, I wasn´t looking for professional advice or let the community to know there was a game out to review.
Anyway, I must say I agree with most of your comments, and I wish I could have fixed that before, but the deadline was getting closer and I couldn´t spend one more minute on this, but I´ll keep in mind your observations for my next project, actually I was thinking to make a proper game of this one, different levels, more enemies, better collisions, better sound... would you test that out if I´ll make it? thank you mate
i have no idea how to play this and the game is lagging on me
archienemigo responds:
Oh, I´m really sorry, i wanted to include on "how to play" a video explaining which controls you need to use, my mistake, I didn´t expect people will try my game without knowing who am I, really sorry I wasted your time, I´ll try to keep it in mind for my next project
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