The creation of characters was not upto the mark,the lady did'nt look lika a lady , the men didnt look like men ,Cat was good truck was also made well.Dude you seriously have to plan out your scenes and shots well on paper with pencil then work it out in flash.Even the anatomy of the humans were not at all proper , Practice human anatomy daily so that your sense of characters develop other wise you won't get a good rating . Other than this the sound quality and voice over was very good and the only thing i liked in your movie clip.All the best for your upcoming episodes!!!!