Your drawings are great, but next time try to put more movement in. This gave me a good laugh too so good job.
Author Comments
This is a project for my English class, where I had to make a satire/sarcastic commercial where I highlight how companies advertise and sell their products. I decided to go with the video game industry.
Azumaro responds:
Thank you! Now that I've got this project out of the way, I'll definitely be adding movement in my next Flash. Glad you liked it! =)
Southpark proved u can get away without having leg movement but...i think its kind of important to have mouth movement even if its not 100% perfectly syncd.. possibly consider better recording equipment too. This was more of a slideshow than an animation, which is kind of a shame considering the drawing was actually quite good
Azumaro responds:
I totally agree with you 100%! This was made for an English project, and I literally had less than 6 days to come up with the storyboard, the characters, find voices for them, and learn Flash before the deadline! This was my first time using the program, so now that I warmed up with it, I'm definitely gunna put out some better stuff! ;D
Thanks for the feedback!
Haha, dude, that was awesome!
And a short, wity look at a big truth.
I loved this!
Azumaro responds:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and agree with the message! XD