I like it, but you should try to add more to the story. I realize this game was an experiment for you and it really is good. I like how the art is and i like the varied personalities, but like i said there is a lot that could have been added to the story to make it more interesting. I like that in your comments that you warned about spelling and grammatical errors, but if you are planning to make more games you may want to work on a way to decrease the amount of errors.
Probably the best yaoi game there is right now. All you need is to add variety of characters and it would be awesome.
Well it gave me some laughs so I cant be too hard on it but why isn't there any sound?? The art isn't really my thing but for this game I think it fits.
I would make more choices as well, for some weird reason I kinda wanted more
short and sweet, liked zee the best
Rick X Bae <3 all the way man X"D lul