I... I... I... Found it interesting. I cared about Nappyman as a character, up until late in the story. I was quite relieved when the shark ate him. The whole thing was funny. I had a nice little laugh! Keep it up man!
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Nappyman goes to the pool, makes a bitter enemy, and fights it out. All in about ten seconds.
BlackMagnumFilms responds:
Thanks :P
It goes to fast but you have got some nice visuals there
Brilliant!
This is far from the worst thing I've seen in the portal, however, it still need many improvements. The audio is a nice quality and it's very clear but if the narration were slower it would be much easier to understand what's being said.
Slower narration would also allow you to add more frames so the whole thing feels more complete.