Dress up demo. Graphics needs more detail and better visuals. Gameplay needs many more options and choices. With hard work this demo might be improved.

This was made on 3/24/13, and I am only the tenth person to review it.

Fun

This was a positive experience and a fun dress up game that you have created here giving off some fun extras giving tye idea of creativity with this dress up gam. Because its a pretty solid and fun game and i really liked it. And it was the little detail within the dress up gam. That shined off very well so please do make even more down the road I look forward to even more

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Although the model is pretty and the backdrop allows the colors to be more clear there needs to be a variety of clothing for a dress-up game to be good. Atleast 4 of each accessory and maybe some different hairstyles/colors.

What was the point in this? To show that you can make a game that has no redeeming values? I mean given that this is your first project, I would cut you some slack, but I've seen better. Much much better than what you've got here.

What you have is good, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)