Wow, I really like the motion flow on this one. It's really unique! As for the humor and voice, I say work on the humor a bit more (if you want to, that is) and the voice quality is okay, but other than that it's pretty good!
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My first original video using my own audio. I love the bounciness of this. I love this in general. OOOooo it turned out good.
Also, I won't be able to have preloaders on Newgrounds because I use Toon Boom Animate.
But yeah, I'm proud of this one! It's a concept I came up with years ago in a sketchbook comic. Animating old comics of mine seems like it's a fun idea. It's like redrawing an old sketch, but with movement and audio. There was a huge script change and character design change but yeah, it turned out pretty great.
I like the finalized design that I gave MWON (Man with Opposable Nose). Before hand he was kind of just an awkward looking human with a round head. Quite honestly, not memorable in the least. In this video you can actually see an evolution of MWON's hairstyle. In the beginning it's just spiky, but near the end his head starts looking like a fish. I like it.
I don't know what's up with that blue guy though.
Voice quality could use some improovement. Some backround music would be nice. The voices could be seperated a bit aswell.
I thought this was pretty original, well animated. I would give more stars if there was a preloader
but good
This is so wierd!
I like you managed to record the audio in pretty much one long run on sentence.
The animation is definitely really solid, your next step should be making something lengthy with the same quality so you can practice consistency.