it made me feel special for a moment. :3
I got a fuzzy feeling from the wink, I thought it was good even as a first. :D
What you have is good. There's just not enough to it. It needs a story, characters, music, and magical twinkly sparkles before it can be considered complete.
Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.
Good luck! :)
....ponies! Woot! (B
Oh! I see. Man, I really wish NG has told me this stuff... I even read the terms and conditions too, but this entire thing is leaving me confuzled. :/ And not because I lack English skills either; I understand the terms and conditions, but I feel that NG assumes you know what you're doing with the interface, and all these ERROR 502 errors aren't helping :/
Thanks for the tip.