Well, to be your first animation it doesn't look TOO bad, there are worse things out there, but still, you have to improve a lot xD At least it made me laugh a little, BUT and i mean a BIG BUT, you shouldn't try to draw like egoraptor or taking his "awesome" concept either, seriously, take your own drawing style and ideas, there are already a lot of Egoraptor rip-offs out there, and we don't like rip-offs right?
Oh and i just realized, how come the weight of the file is so high? damn