the art was original and it had ok sound effects but it should be longer and have a llitle more comedy
Author Comments
I am making animations for a newsletter at my workspace.
this is the first of those animations, I would like to have some feed back on how to improve the animation.
its an okay animation...but rating it teen is a bit too sensitive.You should rate it teen if there is blood in it, not if there is just a bit of mean comedy in it.