It's an improvement from episode 5. I liked the "sponsored in part by" joke in the beginning, that's a good way to start an episode. I already mentioned what I thought about the art and animation style in my review for episode 5, so this review will focus primarily on the writing.
This episode was pretty good. I'm thinking that this was originally a Scratch project, right? And you're just recording the gameplay? Normally something like that wouldn't look good, but in this episode it actually worked well.
I noticed that in the beginning though, the vampire doesn't really seem to be much of a threat, more of a moron, but considering that this was originally supposed to be a game, I guess that doesn't really matter because of the battle gameplay.
yeah, in my beginning episodes 1 to 16 i think have narrations. my newer episodes get better, funnier and have more fitting actions.