It was okay for a first flash. Could you add a preloader next time or atleast a play button?
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im still getting use to the animation of flash so its not of the best.
hope you njoy!!
Jeffta responds:
i will do that next time,im still new to newgrounds way of things.
Not bad for your first portal submission.
The character designs are pretty good but you should at least utilize basic things such as stopping your animation after its over. I'm ty ping this and I keep hearing the Harlem shake.
Jeffta responds:
thank you! im not sure how to stop it looping.
Mmmmmmhhhhmmmm.............
Although not brilliant, I have seen far worse first atempts than this. Keep at it and keep putting in the effort and I'm sure you can deliver some things to be really proud of.
Jeffta responds:
thank you i will do that.