Well, I can see that you tried putting a little effort into the lip syncing, but the first three thought bubbles are unreadable, there is a long pause where the video cuts to white and the song keeps playing and then it loops over again playing another song on top of the first unfinished one. I'm pretty sure I gave your other flash a pretty low rating last night as well, I know you've put effort into this, but its certainly not a finished project yet, and its not really worth having uploaded to newgrounds, sorry guy. Just, newgrounds isn't for EVERY flash you ever do, and the things I've seen you uploading sort of look more like tests and practice flashes.