hey, good work sir!
i liked how you made something unique and original, with a strange character like fire... and i also enjoyed the fact that yoy made it a cute fire, with his mother and his quiet life, until the threat arrives...
nice story, with nice set of friends and foes, a nice story, and with adorable characters.
this could turn out into a very good mino-series, and with the idea of living mini-elements, like rocks, fire, water, air/mini-clouds, and other elements that could create a small, interesting society.
this could be fun.
you do good things, and your FBF was excellent.
keep it up.