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Video Game BS comp vol. 1

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Hello Newgrounds,

This is my first compilation of animations so its kinda simple in terms of scripting.
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thekiwi responds:

Yeah you cant do this on youtube you know :)

The characters looked quite decent(if it is your art style to draw facial features like that)although they could look a little overexaggerated,but this is meant to poke fun at the characters that most people recognise,just a little more practice,so they would not look so messy(Sonic's face,for example.)The jokes,although simple,it is a first attempt and seems to be quite original,so good work on that.You could 'study' more about the characters(sure,everyone knows Sonic,but what about the other characters that have appeared with him in all the series,for example)or you could watch old reruns to get some ideas.You could even use your own ideas to create your own series and not just references,thus giving it more originality(like some animators have done.)Good work on this anyway and good luck!

thekiwi responds:

Thank you !

Damn do I love me some constructive feedback ! I agree with everything you wrote.

I might start my own original series soon with casual jokes instead of gaming.

*Videos / *AN awesome little animation.

Please...please fix your grammar. The shorts were okay, though.

thekiwi responds:

Will fix !

Congrats on the nice setup. Everthing looks great design wise. The cartoons were funny, though i'd recommend staying away from 'memes' (as seen in the Mario skit)

You're style is unique and i enjoyed it, though you use the boil effect (making a 2-frame loop in which one frame has smoother lines than the other frame to make your character/object look more alive) as i only recommend it for shots of a single expression with no other kind of movement. All in all, shit was tight.

thekiwi responds:

Thanks for your well described feedback, yeah i have to lay off the meme-ish expressions, shit is getting old.

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Feb 11, 2013
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