I really like the brother grimms stories and I'm sad you did not go through with the whole story but stopped in the middle and changed the ending.
But I did liked your art and the animations a lot and would like to see more stories :)).
This definitely needs a few tweaks. The voice overs overlap each other, and when you scroll to find a place for them to sleep, it is incredibly slow.
I suggest re-submitting this after working out a few bugs. :)
It's a great concept, but poor delivery. The art and voicing could use a bit of work. As a starting point, this isn't too bad. As for the narrator, the voice is muddled. Maybe you could have some subtitles to better understand what is being said.
This is a great starting point, but not finished material. Keep trying, though. I'm interested in what you come up with!
It wasn't bad. It was fairly well made, I just think that you need to implement a way of stopping the dialogue so that it doesn't clump all together like it did.