Again, the animations are pretty rough and the graphics aren't that good. But again this flash convinces because of it's content and not because of "eye candy".

I like the story here. It's pretty funny and I had to smile at the end. So I guess your mission is accomplished. :)

The musical choice is again pretty good. The music fits to the flash, so you've done a good job here.

Overall: The second movie from you that I review and I could just copy paste my other reivew here, because I think it holds true fro both flashes: The story is nice, the music is good, but there are some things missing (like, a more fluent animation, additional sound effects, etc.).
I surely hope that you will continue to upload flashes, because I think you have a talent for short stories.

{ Review Request Club }

A simple yet funny short, one of those ideas that for me was a "why didn't I think of that?" moment. The writing can't be faulted but the animation at times was slow and seemed to drag on a bit, for example when the meatballs start to go into the babies mouth, that could have done with being a second or so shorter. All these little cuts here and there would have made it more snappy and in my opinion funnier.

I would also have liked to see more time gone into detailed drawings. The baby was ok (although it looked very pale and almost like some kind of sick dead baby joke in bits), the dad on the other hand has an arm coming out of where it shouldn't.

I do like this movie but if just a little more time had done into it I'm sure it could have been much better because you started with a great idea.

- Review Request Club -

Original.. But not what i actually expected... And confusing... I feel awkward about this... I think like "WTF!" and im lolling a little bit... FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

ew. but i enjoyed it