This is actually really good for a first animation. I have never tried animating myself, but the movement is actually pretty well put together, the syncing of sound and animation is super on-point.

I absolutely hate Dark Souls with all of my heart, but this animation is great.

Also fuck New Londo.

Actually, for your first animation Ever, it doesn't look bad.
I like your attitude in the description, but it kinda calls for rude people.
It'd be best if it used "constructively critical" instead of "harsh"

You have some talent here. Learn how to put a stop on the end of your vids and you'll be in buisness.