The art was really good, but the voices could definitely be better.
There was quite a bit of noise and there was probably a low quality microphone used.
You should create a noise filter to get rid of the noise.
Would improve it by a lot.
*UPDATE*
You can now view the complete animation here on Newgrounds;
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/622204
Or on youtube (if you really want)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CVk0clOudBM
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The eternal debate between an animator and a writer. True Story.
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Sidenote: This was supposed to be my second animation ever, so the audio is a bit dated, and I couldn't get a hold of the voice actor to re-record it, so my apologies for the low quality voice acting. <3
The art was really good, but the voices could definitely be better.
There was quite a bit of noise and there was probably a low quality microphone used.
You should create a noise filter to get rid of the noise.
Would improve it by a lot.
The audio is pretty old and not mine so there was no way to improve that. Maybe it's in my export settings?