nice , keep it up dude !! you 'll be better by time ;)
i enjoyed it :D
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My oh my, I'm finally done this stupid thing. I started it last Summer (July 2012) and i just finished it today. I could have finished it earlier but I was working on it on and off, and I also had school and soccer.
Ummmm.... theres over 4000 frames and over 50 layers. It was originally a Parkour practice but then I kept adding to it and it eventually became a full animation. You can see that my style and skill changes throughout the video. I have worked very hard on this, so please take the time to comment, critique and stuff like that. It would be very helpful :)
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Nice Animation.. The only cons that I see are; When they walk.. need a little more tuning to it.. (what is the frame per second by the way?) The text when they talked.. it may be harder for some who can read fast.. but.. it is nice that it didn't take long (it was simple but it added spice) The scene where he parkour, it is kinda vague to the story.. (other viewers may not get it.. this shows that he was weak before right?) Well.. that is all the cons that I can think about.. Besides that.. I Love IT! 4.5 stars for you.. And I Love the scene where the devil made a deal with him.. Most stick animations just shows that the main character is all powerful.. Your work has nice details to it..
I don't know what are your plans for the next series.. But, I suggest that.. use the scenes you made for the intro,, To let the story unfold itself.. Well, Just a suggestion.. If you have other ideas to make the story progress.. then go for it ^^_ CHEERS!! Hope to see more =D
ArtBourne responds:
Thx for the comment!!! ummm. the fps was originally 22 but i had to change it, due to audio synching problems, to 23.95 (I had to search it up). I totally agree with all the cons that you stated. And I can kinda see why you said the parkour part was vague, but it was mostly because it was originally a practice anim. Thanks so much for the rating, and I'll keep your tip in mind for the sequel ;).
And again thanks so much for the comment I really appreciate it.
Reminded me of soul eater, i like the fluidity.
qnd i must say, those are probably the most serious stick figures ive ever seen.
ArtBourne responds:
lol Thanks.
Great work. Stick animating is, and always will be epic.
ArtBourne responds:
Thanks :) and I totally agree.
Pretty solid. I would have preferred more gunplay, however the few seconds of gunplay was very awesome and realistic in terms of how quick it was. Had some framerate issues, not sure if it's my computer or the video itself. Nice cliffhanger at the end though; cliche' but still good. Keep it up, looking forward to seeing the next episode.
ArtBourne responds:
thx so much for the comment, really appreciate it. And yah I agree i could have added some more gun action. Regarding the framerate issue, I had the same thing (the part when he jumps from the pillar to the upper floor), sometimes its at different times and I didn't know how to fix it. Thanks again for the comment. :)