Good Job ;-)
Would work better as art. Not much in the way of animation.
There was like.. one animation... her eyes blinking. lol.
You gotta finish your cartoon before submiting it to the portal. You're little sketches were pretty cool, they've got potential, but you gotta actually animate them before submitting them. Not sure if this was just a rough draft, which is what it seemed like, but if it was, you need to keep it to yourself until your project is finished. Practice animating your sketches more, there's nothing wrong with pencil-like animation, so long as there's actual animation.
tl;dr finish animating bro! They're called animations for a reason.
Meh, its not that good. I should have listened to your beware.
You should have.