I like the way you share your thoughts
This isn't something you see everyday. It's simple, silent, and... well blank. It's an insight ti life, and what people could be like, but to be honest the simplicity of it doesn't do enough. I'm unsure as to why you chose to not even put in any background music, but to even be able to do the "rough line" style of work is something else. I'd like to see more of this series, but as for episode three... just try to make it slightly less simplistic. Add in a little more motion, or as I suggested before, add some background music. I'm adding you to my"to watch" list Duong.
Thanks for your input! These episodes are a few years old, and I finally decided to upload them. I have about 9 episodes, all of the same format: no sound, text, and the same style animations. I'm considering beginning another "season" of which I think I'll narrate and have background music!
The animation was pretty good, the story was simple about ordinary life, nothing extreme or cool. You should add voice to this it would be better instead of reading. Apesar de todo, muy buen trabajo!
It's kinda of a hard one to judge because on the one hand I think it's interesting and drawn really well but the silence is deafening (if you catch my drift). Don't get me wrong I think having no voice acting and subtitles is a good concept but it at least needs background music or something.
It's well written, kinda funny and a good idea. If only it had some form of audio.