On my end, everytime the inmate had a close up, he would talk, but the talk animation isn't synched up, and doesn't end maybe like 5 seconds after he speaks. Might just be me, though.

I felt like the pace crawled a little bit, the end made up for it in my opinion. overall I was entertained, so success there. only real thing I would gave liked to see is having the dialog flow more naturally. otherwise kudos overall.

interesting concept...alot to work on tho...