This may not be very impressive from a technical standpoint, but the concept and premise is funny and this could be something really good if the visuals were better. The voice acting was pretty limited but I believe that's part of the humor.
Some of the frame-by-frame animation was a little bit choppy, but a good inbetween can definitely fix this.
Overall, I like the writing and you have potential. This could be something very good if the visuals were more aesthetically pleasing and you have a nice sense of humor.