I couldn't finish it. My girlfriend thought this was amuzing and although I admit I thought it was funny for the first 3 seconds, I quickly realized that there was nothing to this submission. That's an excellent way to lose respect and make it so no one ever wants to watch anything you ever create. I wish there was a way to hide users' submissions because if there was you would be on that list just for this crappy submission.
My question to you is; would it have hurt you so badly to actually do voiceover work? Would it have hurt you to do some actual animation?
Just terrible.