Needs color.. and you ear FU**ed me.... and also make it longer and maybe funnyer..
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an annoying girl wants to be friends
Well.. didn't make much sense XD
The draw style could be okay if you worked on it a little... Maybe just try tidying it up a bit.
Lastly, there isn't really much 'animation'. Luckily, you made the 'trembling' effect so the images weren't just still.
Too short and not that interesting.
Sorry,
Just stick to art.