Nice sketch work, but there is no muisc.
Might wanna find out why.

a white screen... That's original.. BLAMMED.

Look

I see how great this can be. The art style and supposed animation is there. However, it'd be best not to upload this yet. Take the timie to finish it. Smooth everything out, add some audio, and fix the ending page at the end. Also add preloader cos movies on repeat are annoying and unprofessional.