very artistic but also very repetitive. Enjoyed the song.
Author Comments
A dance conjured from 5 gesture sketches.
Song: Beware the Friendly Stranger
Boards of Canada
giving it a 2.5 simply for being unique and something out of the ordinary. The audio quality is kind of wierd, but i have a feeling that was done on purpose to simulate a record playing. Other than that the dots floating around the screen are a nice touch, but i feel they distract from the main focus (the figure that is dancing). It's not a bad thing that there is a lot going on in the flash, just need to figure out how to highlight your main focal point well and i think this type of flash would be much better.
studioAPOGEION responds:
Thanks for the critique.
The dots moving around the screen are layers of the dancing figure enlarged and rotated to the point of abstraction.
You made a good point. Eliminating the focal point at the end was an intentional move on my part, but I can see how that can mess with the overall feel of the short and force the viewer out of the experience.
I like to break the rules, but if it looks like a mistake...
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this is new i've never seen anything like it. I give it 4 stars for being something i've never seen before and being cool to boot.
Solid animation, interesting song choice, but it seems to work out fine.
Very interesting style.
I really like this.
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