To faaaast, can't read a single thing!

the text moves too fast and there is a lack of music or any sound going on in the background. If you are not going to do voice-overs you should at least have music of some sort. The sound effects were also a bit out of place. Other than that I think you really need to just put more time and thought into your next submission.

Ok,
There´s a lil time to read, its hard to read it, the animations are not very good, looks like you´re in a rush to end this thing and put it on the web.
Dude, take more time and patience, mind for the details, and the animation must have an end, even if it´s splited on parts.
you have forgoted to add stop code at the end of it.

you have potential, but you need to work it out.

:D

Vitor Silveira

Unfornatley this was rather boring.
The talking boxes need longer display times.
Seems rather rushed.