Seems interesting, I'd really like to see what happens next, when do you think the next will be ready?
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Story: Here's the beginning of Spirit, the living golem. Created from dark matter, he becomes a wanderer and is guided by a mysterious voice, into a white void of space..
MY FIRST ANIMATION!!!11 IN ABODE FALSH ._.
JuJuBeeh responds:
I will work on it as soon as possible, :D. I have no idea when it will be ready.
Stay tuned for the upcoming episode.
-JuJuBeeh
This would be a promising start to an interesting series, had the art been better. Really, it doesn't look like you put much effort into animating anyone but the big, one-eyed monstrosity (I don't think you mentioned its name). And while I'm a fan of minimalism, you have to do it right- all the characters are one solid color, so I would have expected you to make the animation fucking fantastic, considering they're so simple to draw. Instead, it looks like you didn't care too much about putting effort into your animation.
Though I do like the big guy's voice acting, that's really the only redeeming quality. Please, work harder on the animation.
JuJuBeeh responds:
Thanks i love your comment, i now know where to improve. It's not that i don't care about the colour, it's just i have absolutely No idea, how to tone,colour and make animated stuff look nice.
But still, THANK YOU FOR YOUR INPUTS! -Hugs- you.
-JuJuBeeh