Lol funny
Well that was notbad at all and was pretty funny it was very "SHORT" like really short, I mean you have a funny idea here and really made it work even beyond the end and that was pretty amusing, you have some decent talent with humor based on some of your other works, I think as an idea here you could put a lot of your short pieces all in one submission that would be a nice showcase, but regardless this was pretty good work if you ask me.
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I think as an idea here you could put a lot of your short pieces all in one submission that would be a nice showcase
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