Looks nice, but there's no instructions or anything- controls should be explained. Also, the controls are fairly sluggish and limited.
Author Comments
This is my final project for Scripting I. It is the first full level coded completely by me. Please feel free to give me comments/critiques.
NOTE: I did not create any of the art or sounds in this game. All of the content in this game is subject to "fair use." Section 107 of the CopyrightAct 1976.
Enjoy :)
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lol good game
first off, some basic instructions would be good, an explanation as to what the storyline and what the items do would have been helpful. I did like the fact that the characters did have different strengths and abilities, but it felt lacking.
For a first level, it isn't bad at all. All it needs is some polishing with your technique. The controls weren't bad, but they felt a bit stiff. I look forward to seeing your future games :D
This is lovely :D But it requires a bit more polish.
1. The HUD needs some serious work, aesthetically speaking. Right now, it takes away from the cute graphics the game has.
2. Walking up a slope doesn't work, yet walking down a slope does. Might want to make slopes walkable, instead of having to jump on it.
3. When jumping, if your head bumps into a ledge above you, it cuts your jump and you fall straight down. This is especially noticable when you're standing on the rightmost dark edge at the very start, and want to jump to the left one. Head bumps into the "ceiling" and the jump gets cut short.
It's a great beginning, but, as said, still requires alot of polish. It'll be a great game if done properly, and you're on the right path!
It's cute, but the controls are a little unresponsive and the dog can't walk uphill.
It would also be a good idea to show the controls before the level (it took me a while to realize I could shoot with the mouse). Maybe also add an animation when you take damage.