vas practicando despues ras mejores

Vas bien, animo amigo.

Great first episode! Heres some suggestions:
Give the viewers a choice between english and spanish subtitles. I can read spanish just fine, but theres a lot of us who cant. I would recommend practicing frame by frame for your next submission. Your tweens and movie clips were very well done, but those will only get you so far. Good job!

This is well done in its character design and the plot looks interesting,just remember to put in English subtitles next time as a wider audience can understand the story better.