Thank you for the contribution, I hope that you've got the basics of text RPGs down pat so that I can see something more progressive in the future.
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First game created in Flash for a college assignment, all forms of criticism would be nice (I am fully aware it's quite a bad game xD) If people could take this short survey too as I have to collect feedback, link here: www.surveymonkey.com/s/ LW2GSWV (Please remove the space in the link for it to work)
Can you tell me the name of the song?
Eeveechaaaan responds:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z1O-Ik-THrQ Here is the link to it :)
Honestly, the game just needs more work in general in every aspect and way. I would love to see more choices though and see some better artwork throughout it and make the text not so plain and boring. Also play around with the buttons because the circles are really dull and get irritating to look at. I do however enjoy the song very much. In fact I enjoyed it so much, I had my screen opened to hear the song while I worked.
The music is the only part that doesn't suck
I could go into detail in what your game lacks, but I think it ultimately leads to the lack of effort.
If that is true, it would be kinda pointless to make a list on what to improve since you have not showed what you are capable of at all in the first place.
To be honest, It is kind of a disgrace to present this kind of show to an audience, and if I was your teacher, I would be REALLY disappointed.
Eeveechaaaan responds:
Thanks for telling me stuff I already knew xD