The animation was cool but it should have been zoomed in
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It took like a month to be finished.
Please critique it as honest as you can, remember this is my first animation (in Newgrounds) and i need help to be better.
The animation and the sprite was really good! Plus, the sound effect was well placed! For the music, it just go perfectly with the fight. Maybe you could put some background and event damage it during the fight. It would be great! I am watching this sprite animation again for sure!
Umbrarum responds:
Thanks fo the tips.
I`ll think about them...
That was some amazing quality work! The only thing that it needs work on is the fact your music seemed to cut out rather quickly during the battle... but it was still incredibly well done and I would really look forward to another animation like this. Maybe you could try adding some story too?
All the same though, I believe if you worked at it, you could make a good animation. Maybe your next one can be X VS ganondorf?
Umbrarum responds:
I apreciate your opinion. Yes there is a secuel, and years ago i uploaded to youtube a full version, but i realized that was pitiful jeje. This one is a little scene that i was working on as a trailer. I wont do a complete version but i have other magnific ideas to do. Emmm there are not enougth Gandondorf´s sprites but i did X vs Deoxys... Soon i will upload it, also the sequel...
You need to make a sequel to this. It was actually well done and I am interested in seeing more.
Umbrarum responds:
Actually i have done one, but i would like to upload in a week or two.
If you want to see it...:
http://thedarkdeoyx.deviantart.com/art/Maverick-Zero-vs-Fierece-deity-Link-334243380
Very good, just work on the preloader, and make a better background, and if it's possible, a little plot
Umbrarum responds:
Sure. This was only a work that i culdn´t finish because my university...
I want to do a master piece about some thing... But it will took like a year.