resubmiting its still utter crap now heres the reaons why 1 its too short 2 the animation is a bit lazy three there arnt even any words in the whole thing ..working on sound my ass,,,4its stupid to no end 5 it dosent even make sense 6 it could of been better 7 i just dont like it, make it longer add more scripts and perhaps a more well developed drawling
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i made this to have more work with sound effects since it is something i am struggling with right now in my other on-going projects. It was also a way to let me learn how to make buttons to link to other URLs.
EpilepticEmus responds:
Ok, ill admit in hindsight this probably isn't newgrounds material and I probably just should have left it on youtube. However, youtube is useless for decent feed back on animations so thats why I posted it here. Also, when I meant sounds I meant sound effects, I am new to animating and have never really worked with sound effects before( and btw he doesn't talk because he is a blob, I decided this when designing the character). I can't change if you dont like it, or think it's stupid, but i just wanted to clarify some things so you can see it for what it is. I'm not going for a Oscar here, Im just testing my skills. And thank you for the review, even if its more negative than constructive it still helps.
Pretty short, and wasn't particularily interesting.
That said, the animation was alright, hammer looked and moved good, like, there's nothing wrong here, just felt mostly pointless is all. Just when I thought some punchline was about to happen, it zapped back to the play button, left my mouth feeling kind of dry haha
EpilepticEmus responds:
yah like the description said im just trying to get used to working with sound effects but thanks for the review!
nice... good character design
EpilepticEmus responds:
haha thanks!
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