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PikaPoop

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A young boy learns about the magic of friendship and the power of pokemon.

Lol jokes its a parody C;

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The first time i saw this Oney come to my mind instantly.

And you forgot to colored the shadows

JoeliusNG responds:

ohokay

by stealing styles, he means, this sure looks allot like the hellbenders type animation, with the meme faces and what not, although they didnt invent it, they sure made it popular, and countless videos on here are emulating that style.

funny cartoon, but id like to see something more original

JoeliusNG responds:

there aren't any meme faces here... and all of the animation is just cartoon style. noone owns it.

What an amazing story. I love the fight scene.
Its a heart breaking story.
You should wach this. (You think that folled them?)

JoeliusNG responds:

definitely. XDD

don't steal styles pls, it's not cool bro

JoeliusNG responds:

man... I have my own style, what exactly am I copying?

Okay....

So the jist of this Flash is, Pikachu says no to the trainer, so it gets kicked.

That's it. That's all there is.

Considering how Pokemon has been done to death, this is all you could come up with? Well, whatever. Here's my critique.

There was little to no animation in this video, but from what I saw you need more work. It just looks like a bunch of key frames smashed together when the trainer is speaking(also Pikachu). Then you move the trainers symbol a little while you had an irrelevant song playing(After "Whatcha Say" the rest has nothing to do with the Flash). Not even sure what you did to make Pikachu move but it looks odd. Still, despite this since you at least attempted you get a half star for that.

The other half star is for your art. It's not the best but you have a style I can differentiate. Not sure if that was on purpose or not. I was disappointed at the end when you decided to be lazy and scribble the third and last scene of your Flash. It would have been forgivable if you put effort into it, but you didn't.

Someone said this had potential, and I agree. However, you just decided to be lazy and not take your time with it, as indicated from the last scene. I suggest making more of an effort on the actual content of your movies and of course the art. Don't half ass it. You start out with a certain quality keep that quality going until the end.

Oh, the other star was for the loader. At least it doesn't loop, can't tell you how annoying it is.

I know you can do better, I look forward to your next video.

JoeliusNG responds:

thanks for the honest review man, I'll try to put more work and frame by frame animation in my next animation :3

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Dec 3, 2012
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