Ok, I'm really not sure what you had going here... First off, the graphics are pretty bad. Secondly, the controls are terrible. I spent probably 3 tries on the first level alone. Third off, fix the game over screen. It's horrid ear rape. Seriously. (All in all, fix the sound, the girl sounds like she's meowing)
All things considered though, this could be a good game. My suggestion would be to take it back down, polish it up a bit and re-sub it as a finely polished product. It just needs work.
Meowing is here: http://sounddogs.com/sound-effects/25/mp3/306543_SOUNDDOGS__an.mp3. In this game there'sn't meowing!
Terrible spelling on story. No real clues on how to play or the objective.
Story, New game, Load game, Help. The only button that works here is the Newgrounds in the upper right side.
Use arrow keys to navigate main menu. This game like as combined Commander Keen & Megaman & at same time unlike any game.
In the small amount of time I played your game, I wasn't quite sure what I was suppose to do. I only had a very basic idea. When I got it started I didn't know that I needed to run into those things shooting lasers(?). I was scared to because I thought it would kill me but I was like fuck it and I guess I was right about running into them. Also, visually this game needs some work. I wasn't sure what I could and couldn't run into.