relative to other content on newgrounds, this is unacceptable. Flashing lights shouldn't count as animation. Besides that, hardly anything moves at all. I'm not even sure if this was supposed to be funny or cool or what.
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This is My first flash animation, yes I suck ass. Like the ass of an organic orphan liver. That continuously shits on everything decent in this world.
Song: Europe- The Final Countdown
For awhile I wasn't sure if the video was working, then the person popped up.. and did nothing. Then he turned around and a face flew at the screen. In the future you should try to keep the story going with no long pauses. Maybe you could have added lights moving in the dark in the beginning or the character tapping their hand to the beat? I didn't understand the angry face.. Three stars since it was your fist animation but there is room for improvement.
nice hellbenders ripoff..
sorry man, but this is just too similar.
the hair eyes mouth and head were all taken from hadel and oneil.
JellyfishFeces responds:
Thanks for the advice! As I said, this was the very first thing I did in flash. I will try to change it up if I make anything else. Thanks again! Also, your avatar has the exact eyes and eyebrows as the characters in hellbenders. Is it really wrong to be inspired by something?
ps: It would be insulting to Psychicpebbles to compare me to his cartoons. I suck lol.