Considering this is your first animation, I guess I shouldn't be too critical.
The idea for the animation was okay and the art and animation was for a first-timer pretty good (more or less fluent animation and well-done art).
However two things were sorely lacking: music and sound.
Now, I barely know anything about animation myself, but I don't think it would be too hard to add sound and music to it and Kirby-soundbits and -music shouldn't be that difficult to come by.
As I said though, I liked the idea and the animation, but it still needs a bit of work.