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Kirby's New Form

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Kirby finds something on the ground and decides to eat it, because he's Kirby. Also, basically the first animation I've ever done.

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Considering this is your first animation, I guess I shouldn't be too critical.
The idea for the animation was okay and the art and animation was for a first-timer pretty good (more or less fluent animation and well-done art).
However two things were sorely lacking: music and sound.
Now, I barely know anything about animation myself, but I don't think it would be too hard to add sound and music to it and Kirby-soundbits and -music shouldn't be that difficult to come by.
As I said though, I liked the idea and the animation, but it still needs a bit of work.

Corleo responds:

But I'm pretty sure there's music there...

i like the style, good joke, but it was just a little short.

Let's start.
What did you use to draw? Almost all programme have preset shapes. That will help you to make more beautiful shape for the character.
The time: to short of course. Try to put joke one behind the other.
The good thing is you had song. This is a excellent thing that a lot of people forget.
That all. Keep working. With some time and work you don't know what you can make.

Corleo responds:

I used flash 8 to draw this, but I didn't use preset shapes for a reason. If I did, I feel that the animation would look too stale, and that's not really what I wanted :P

Lol, and that's why you don't do drugs kids! :)

Old joke, but I liked your animation. Not bad for a first try (especially if you watch this portal and view all the other 'first animation' attempts. <_<)
Keep hacking at it, can't wait to see how much the next one improves!

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3.50 / 5.00

Nov 28, 2012
10:41 AM EST