The animation style was appropriate for the dialogue..Only this shouldnt have been rated E. He drops the F-Bomb several times, and the rating is a bit misleading.
Overall good job.
Author Comments
This took a lot longer than I planned it to, but I wanted to do a Game Grumps animation of a sound byte I took of Jontron and Egoraptor play this game. Unfortunately, it's not really relevant anymore, but it was great animation practice. This is only my second cartoon anyways.
Up next will hopefully be something with voice acting in it, but my mic and voice acting skills currently suck.
My Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/cr 1sisentertainment
The Grumps are:
Egoraptor: http://www.youtube.com/eg oraptor
Jontron: http://www.youtube.com/jo ntronshow
Cr1sisEntertainment responds:
Yeah, I check off the thing for some use of innappropriate language and it came up like this. I might have just missed something though. I'll check again.
Edit: Newgrounds originally gave me some error message when I first tried posting this, so when I refreshed it must have reset the rating thing. I must have missed it and forgot to make it teen. It's fixed now though.
I remember this :'D