Shows a slight bit of promise.
The animation looked a lot like it was drawn on paper, then scanned, and then colored in very quickly in MS paint. Some parts looked like looping .gifs which makes it a bit better. However during the main sequence(?) where it shows the characters(?) some parts flash by far too quickly to be looked at. Then towards the end where it shows the crowd it looks zoomed in and very sloppy.
The audio itself would be ok if subtitles were provided so viewers could understand what the song is saying. The voice work at the start could use some work too since the voices were very quiet. The slight static in the background is acceptable but the voices just seem far too quiet.
Overall, it's a start but you should practice drawing in flash so your future animations will look much cleaner. Same goes for voices, put something light over the microphone so it blocks out any static and popping sound you may pick up.
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