I like how it gets to the point.
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A small animation I made for my friend's project to inspire kids to have more fun and stay healthy by eating more fruits and vegetables and less junk.
Original idea by Ben Cyrus & Tilly
jackbliss responds:
Thanks lol that's what we're here for ;)
Hehe this animation made me chuckle. The animation is simple enough for kids to understand, although I can't help but feel like it needs some cheesy voice acting in it. It seems like it would be a great part your friend's project and would help motivate kids to be vigorous and healthy (unlike the unhealthy and fragile junk food!)
jackbliss responds:
Hey thanks! Judging from other reviews I think a cheesy voice may have added something more to it too. Thanks for the review! :)
Seemed a bit...pointless...
Nice lesson, but I don't see the point of this.
jackbliss responds:
It's to inspire and encourage kids to eat more fruits & vegetables instead of junk food. Healthy food equal fun, junk equal boring :)
Pretty good. I appreciate the fact that someone cares about nutrition and all, and aiming this priority at the youth. However, a voice over and some voice acting (perhaps) would actually make it better overall and more appealing to younger viewers, thus strengthening what this flash sets out to do.
jackbliss responds:
Nice feedback. Even we were thinking about adding voice over but were afraid it would become too preachy also we wanted to keep it as short as possible so kids generally have a lower attention span than grown ups and a voice over would drag it a bit. Thanks so much for the review. Cheers :)