the animation was really good for you first animation, but i do think it needs bettter backgrounds and more movement in general. Also the audio quality was REALLY bad so i would suggest using a better mic in the future but over all the animation wasn't to bad
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Nina and Kara were about to spar but they were suddenly attacked by an unknown woman. This is my first animation on Newgrounds and hopefully this won't be the last. Since I'm new in the flash world, the quality won't be perfect. Hopefully you can see what's going on. Anyways, thanks for watching, peace.
Edit:
Thanks for the reviews, I know what I need to work on now. I'll work on my animation and the sound quality when I submit my next short. I'll keep working hard until I'm a great animator.
Actually, noob or not, that was pretty good. With the exception of the sound, that is. The sound of the voicework really needs improvement. So, here:
Watch this one:
http://www.newgrou nds.com/portal/view/590285 (Remove the space)
It'll help. :)
Mrcoleman responds:
Ok. I'll check out the link.
you need to work on your audio, but your doing great!
Mrcoleman responds:
Thanks, I'll work on the audio next time.