some of the scenes were too long
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It's about a boy who wants to go submit the assignment before time. He then wants to print it and go submit it. Unfortunately the system crushes and he missed the deadline.
Very lame. Nothing happened for about half of the animation, and near the end the guy grows a third arm? And was that little stretching box on the desk meant to be a speaker? Why was it moving if there was no music? Art style was okay, if a little sloppy. Audio was...yeah.
you need a lot of improvement but your on the right track
I can apreciate that this is probably a first time effort but I can't say it was a good one.
All I can say is keep at it, and next time, try to push yourself a little. The last thing I want to say is that not everything you animate needs to be posted on Newgrounds although I understand it you just wanted to get some feedback.
yeah not bad