Well not bad, but not good. And I'm pretty sure when you wrote"Holloween" you meant Halloween.
Jack is on his way to a Holloween party and on the way the bushes move and that makes him scared suddenly a
ghost jumps out the bushes and he starts talking to the ghost and convinces him to go with him to a party but he does not
know this ghost and allot happens
it came threw the characters i drew and also how the scene played out it was an idea that people should learn from
clip and not just watch something that does not teach you anything
Well not bad, but not good. And I'm pretty sure when you wrote"Holloween" you meant Halloween.
haha what a champ!!