I really enjoyed the concept of this animation. It was funny and well thought out. I only noticed the text at the corner of the screen, telling how many day into the zombie apocalypse, the second time I watched it. It made me lol, but you should probably make that more noticeable. You were able to present it fairly well; however, the animation needs a bit of work. If your ever going to start using flash frequently, learn to stop using motion tweens. Use frame by frame every once in a while. Anyways, I really enjoyed this animation, because it feels like you put a lot of thought into it. I'm hoping to see more work from you, in the future.
Author Comments
This is a University Project. The Story was a random brainspasm that I had one afternoon while sitting on my balcony and enjoying a cigarette. I really had fun doing this animation and learning how to use Adobe Flash properly.
bvdmerwe responds:
Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll Keep in mind what you said about the text and motion tweens in the next project I tackle :)
Not bad for a first attempt at Flash. I see a lot of effort went into this and you have a lot of potential. I couldn't quite understand the story at first, but after watching it again it made more sense. Awesome idea with the .45 Scythe!
bvdmerwe responds:
I was afraid that the story might not make much sense. But I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!