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Whew! had my storyboard and animated it in 3 Days! Thank Goodness I finished. Well, enjoy and please review, it's very appreciated. By the way, this is my second animation and I hope to improve.

All of the sound is from freesound.org and the music is from incompetech.

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Poorly drawn, and the mouth shapes were scriblles, plot was fucked. you need to write some easy to understand material, and take more time with each drawing. 2 stars for some ambitious effort

BSTHEDOG responds:

Yeah, I definitely needed to take more time with this one and plan it out better. I hopefully wont be making my next animation due on a deadline. Thanks for the review!

It wasn't bad especially for one of your first animations it was an overall good idea with great voice work and sound fx, but the animation obviously needs work (which will come with practice) along with an interesting backround thats appealing to the eye (it can be a still image but it just has to be appealing), and you need to work on making smoother animation at points they seemed a little stiff and/or not very natural

Happy Halloween!!!
-Sean

BSTHEDOG responds:

I definitely agree with you. The backgrounds for this look like shit and are lazy as hell. Thanks for the review!

Really good for only your second animation. The musical selection during the "transformation" scene had me cracking up; Really twisted and fun.

Much luck with your animation future!

BSTHEDOG responds:

Thank you!

A pretty nice ride, funny idea, although you can tell it was made in 3 days.
How about making this animation again, only this time, take 6 days. You already have the storyboard, now focus on making everything look a little sweeter, add some shade to the characters, some detail to the background. For example, a wooden frame around the door, and fix the '2 shades of blue' background wall! (decorations, a see-through window)
Might sound like a drag, but it'll be a great comparison, and maybe you can add some other gags while you're at it!

BSTHEDOG responds:

Well, I would consider that if I released this before Halloween but I feel it would lose its purpose of being a Halloween flash if I re -released it 6 days later. Anyways, thanks for the review!

needs more boobs

BSTHEDOG responds:

What? I thought people would be angry that they didn't all have boners! Goddamnit, this is an outrage!

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Oct 31, 2012
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