I appreciate how good you build up tension. It's difficult to do this with gun fights. I mean, in a realistic sense, you just shoot your gun and the opponent dies. I think this was a pretty realistic way of doing it. The music made it all the better. I guess this was before Clock Day came out.
Okay, it probably wasn't THAT realistic. I don't know much about guns anyway. You put a ton of expression and thought into this. I'm surprised it didn't win Daily Feature. At least you were close.